“AWW they're so cute” Matene said in a high pitched puppy voice . Me and my brother were looking around and saw this one pup “those pups have big poops”
“NO that's not a poop thats a puppy” I shouted. Later that day dad said to come inside because we were going to have a family meeting. During the meeting i was ignoring what he was saying until he said puppys.i was hooked. It was like i was a fish and i got stuck on a hook. ZOOM me and my brother were sprinting to my neighbor's house.
“Which one” I said to myself.there was this one puppy that was sleeping. Get them of me Matene yelled. The puppies were nibbling on Matenes hoodie. It was adorable. All the pups left except this one fluffy pup. So we took him home and named him Bear. I felt like the luckiest girl in the world . He had bright vibrant blue eyes and chocolate brown fur
“You're the best dog in the world Bear” I whispered.
We were learning about were to use adjectives and verbs because it will be useful in the future
I enjoyed writer about the moment that i got my dog because i love my puppy bear and it was really nice writing about it
I found it challenging to remember the whole story because it was a really long time ago
Next time i would change the fount because it seem a bit boring and i want it to be interesting for the reader
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