I enjoyed writing the story because I like doing recants so i really enjoyed writing about swimming sports
I found it challenging to put it on my chromebook because if one word is out of place it does not look right
Next time i would change the font because it seems a bit boring and i want the reader to like it
SPLASH! The first set of kids dived into the worm clear water. I am terrified. There's a billion butterflies in my stomach. I said holding onto my tummy. Cousinly I walked up to the silver slippery starting block and waited for Mrs Aparamama to blow the whistle. Ready! Go! BEEP! I jumped in the water. I gasped for air. My goggles were fogey but I got a glance of the kids in front of me. “I got third place '' I said with excitement. Mr H came around with a A white board. It said butterfly competitive swimmers. I better not do it. I'm terrible at butterfly I said to myself.backstroke competitive. Mr H shouted. The noise from the kids made me not here Mr H. BEEP! SLASH! I was so nervous to get back into the water to do backstroke. I waited in line for my turn. I jumped into the water and when the whistle blew I took off and got second place. What does it say I shouted to Eva C and Azrael. they replied saying it said competitive breaststroke so I started walking over to the starting block and divide in. SPLASH! This time two kids were in front of me and I came third place and ruby, Morgan and Ciara did the relay race for yellow house. And after the relay guess what house won. Morgan,Ruby and Ciara won for the yellow house! YAY!
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